One thought on “✒ drive by beach poem, part ii

  1. Nice idea. The waves of the two colours must work together to maintain the beauty of the sea. I think this has a deeper meaning that could be important for humanity – we may all be of different colours (both literally and figuratively), but for this world to continue to work well and to be beautiful and peaceful, we need to work in harmony with each other. 🙂

    I was also inspired by the imagery of a beach. I think it could complement this poem since it highlights the shore more so than the sea (thus, it could kind of reflect your poem since it’s all about the working together of different elements). Do give it a read here: https://revitellect.wordpress.com/2017/02/18/a-picnic-in-eden-poem/

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